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Module 2 · Get your facts straight

Lesson 5 of 12 · 6 min

Say who your place is for

The sentence most operators refuse to write, and what it costs to skip it.

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Most hospitality websites say they suit everyone. Couples and families. Business and leisure. Quiet retreat and lively base.

A place that suits everyone matches no one.

Think about the real question

Nobody asks for a nice hotel. They ask for something specific:

Two families travelling together, six adults and five kids, somewhere the kids can be loud and the beach is walkable.

To answer that, the system needs a place whose pages say something about families, about noise, about the walk. If your page says you suit everybody, there is nothing to match. It moves on.

Write one sentence

Who has a genuinely good stay at your place? Say it in the words a guest would use.

Then, and this is the hard part, name someone you are not for.

  • Great for groups who want to cook and stay in. Two bathrooms for twelve people, so it is tight if everyone leaves at the same time.
  • Made for couples. No cot, no high chair, and the stairs are steep.
  • Dogs welcome, mud and all. Not the place for a white-carpet weekend.

Why you will want to soften it

Writing down who you are not for feels like turning away money. Most people draft it, look at it, and water it down to something safe.

The safe version is the one that stops working. It also causes the reviews you hate, because the wrong guest booked, arrived, and was disappointed.

Where it goes

On your homepage, on your about page, and in the description of each thing you rent.

Then read your last twenty reviews. If your sentence does not describe the people who wrote them, the reviews are right and the sentence is wrong.

Next: the busiest page you own, and why most of it is empty.

A house that suits everybody matches nobody One request, two listings. Both properties are the same size. Only one of them says who it is for.
The request Somewhere for two families, six adults and five kids, where the kids can be loud Listing A Sleeps 12 · 6 bedrooms · 2 bathrooms "Ideal for families and couples alike." Claims: couples, families, everybody States about bathrooms: nothing in the copy Passed over. Nothing here answers the request. Listing B Sleeps 12 · 6 bedrooms · 2 bathrooms "Two families traveling together, with room for the kids to be loud outside." Claims: two families, kids, groups States: two bathrooms, tight for a school-run start Recommended

The second listing wins on nothing but the writing. It named the situation, admitted the constraint, and gave the system something to check the request against.

Your turn

Write your audience sentence

Who the place is for, in a guest’s words, and who it is not for. The second half is the hard one.

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